Sunday, May 26, 2013

Inspired to Write, But How - Class Number Four

Congratulations upon completion of Week Number Three’s Activity and Welcome to Week Number Four of “Inspired to Write, But How”.   You are here and that says that you are ready to continue on your path to become a writer of poems, short stories, articles, essays, university assignments, and books.  Because this is an online long distance learning experience, consultation via email is available.

Review

In week one, we learned the eight parts of speech.

1.      Nouns
2.      Pronouns
3.      Verbs
4.      Adverbs
5.      Adjectives
6.      Conjunctions
7.      Interjections 
8.      Prepositions

In week two, we learned the four types of sentences and five marks of punctuation.

Four Types of Sentences

1.      Declarative
2.      Interrogative
3.      Imperative
4.      Exclamatory

Five marks of Punctuation

1.      Period
2.      Question Mark
3.      Exclamation Point
4.      Comma
5.      Apostrophe

In week three, we learned what a paragraph is and wrote some paragraphs. 

Merriam – Webster’s Online Dictionary defined a paragraph as a subdivision of a written composition that consists of one or more sentences, deals with one point or gives the words of one speaker, and begins on a new usually indented line.

A paragraph is a short written statement including more than one sentence providing more information than one sentence can alone.  The first sentence is the beginning of what other sentences will provide further information.

We also wrote some four-sentence paragraphs.  Here is one example.  Keep in mind, the first sentence in a paragraph make clear what following sentences will provide more information.

EXAMPLE:  The Johnson’s vacation began the first week in July.  They are going to Orlando, Florida.  They will be away for two weeks.  They will go to Disneyworld, Sea World and Universal Studios.

The first sentence informs a family is going on vacation.  It also tells when the family’s vacation will begin.  The second sentence tells where the family is going.  The third sentence tells how long they will be away.  The fourth sentence will tell what the family is going to do.

      Writing Rule

Write what you know and are passionate.  If you must follow a format, write to the format directions.
  
The Three Remaining Weeks Class Syllabus
·         
·         Monday, May 27, 2013 – Focus of Developing a Writing Outline
·         Monday, June 3, 2013 – First Draft of 750 – 1000 Words Writing Project
·         Monday, June 10, 2013 – Final Draft of 750 – 1000 Words Personal Writing Project

For Class Number Four, we will accomplish the following:

1.      Define what an outline is.
2.      Choose a topic.
3.      Write a thesis statement that expresses clear and personal point of view that is a controlling idea, unifying or core concept that includes three to five components that support your point of view or justifies your thesis statement about your chosen topic.  What is the opinion or point of view you will be supporting.  Point:  Topic plus opinion equals point of view.

Review these models from Youtube.  How to Write an A+ Thesis Statement (Nader-French, 2010)  How to Write a Strong Thesis Statement for Your Essay (Peak, 2010). How to Write a Thesis Statement (Greenstone, 2010).

4.      Each component will serve as an outline section for your writing project.
5.      Learning Activity
6.      Assignment and Email Consultation                                                                          
7.      Preview of Class Number Five – First draft of your writing project 750 to 1000 words.  I 
 offer you this option.  Make your project 500 – 750 words.

References

Greenstone, S. (2010). How to write a thesis statement[Web]. Retrieved from

Nader-French, N. (Performer) (2010). How to write an a thesis statement [Web]. Retrieved from

Peak, D. (Performer) (2010). How to write a strong thesis statement for your essay. [Web].


Merriam – Webster’s Online Dictionary defines an outline as a preliminary account of a project or a plan.  The plan will provide a layout for activity to be completed for each stage of development.

One example of an outline for this project will follow.  Remember the first thing to be accomplished is to choose a topic.  For the example, I choose sexual violence.  I must follow my topic choice with an opinion.  I choose for my opinion, it does not destroy the physical body of the victim but leaves behind a devastated self – esteem, feeling guilt and shame, arrested development, and post-traumatic stress disorder. 

Thesis Statement: Sexual Violence does not destroy the physical body of the victim but leaves behind a devastated self – esteem, a false sense of guilt, a false sense of shame, arrested development, and post traumatic disorder.

This forms the example thesis statement and includes four components the writing project will focus.  Each component will become a standalone paragraph with topic sentence (think little thesis statement for the paragraph).  Add a concluding paragraph summarizing what has been presented and this is an outline for a writing project.

Example

1.     Choose a Topic – Sexual Violence
·         Choose an opinion or position your work will argue for; devastated self – esteem, a false sense of guilt and shame, arrested development, and post traumatic disorder.
2.     Write a thesis statement from topic and opinion with components for support.
·         Thesis Statement including identified components.  Components identify devastated self – esteem, a false sense of guilt and shame, arrested development, and post traumatic disorder.
·         Paragraph speaking to component number one, devastated self – esteem.
·         Paragraph speaking to component number two, feeling guilt and shame.
·         Paragraph speaking to component number three, arrested development.
·         Paragraph speaking to component number four, post-traumatic stress disorder
·         Paragraph summarizing what you have written as restatement of your thesis statement and opening paragraph.

Reminder:   An outline is a preliminary account of a project or a plan.  The plan will provide a layout for activity to be completed for each stage of development.

Learning Activity and Assignment:   In this class you learned to create an outline for the first draft of your writing project to be ready for the next class.  Write 500 – 750 words for you writing project.

Email Consultation – I am available to you to respond to your questions at oscarcrawfordmedia@gmail.com.

Class Number Five – June 3

Monday, June 3, 2013 – Focus on Writing Your First Draft of your writing project from the outline you develop.  I am available to review your project.  A model will be presented for a writing project of 500 – 750 words.  Develop from identified example from Class Number Four.

Inspired to Write, But How is a production of Oscar Crawford Media
© 2013 Oscar Crawford Media  


Monday, May 20, 2013

Inspired to Write, But How - Class Number Three


Congratulations upon completion of Week Number Two’s Activity and Welcome to Week Number Three of “Inspired to Write, But How”.   You are here and that says that you are ready to continue on your path to become a writer of poems, short stories, articles, essays, university assignments, and books.  Because this is an online long distance learning experience, consultation via email is available.

Review

In week one, we learned the eight parts of speech.

1.      Nouns
2.      Pronouns
3.      Verbs
4.      Adverbs
5.      Adjectives
6.      Conjunctions
7.      Interjections 
8.      Prepositions

In week two, we learned the four types of sentences and five marks of punctuation.

Four Types of Sentences

1.      Declarative
2.      Interrogative
3.      Imperative
4.      Exclamatory

Five marks of Punctuation

1.      Period
2.      Question Mark
3.      Exclamation Point
4.      Comma
5.      Apostrophe

Writing Rule

Eliminate the unnecessary.  A writing rule that serves well is to write ideas about what you want to say in your writing. Do not worry about spelling and grammar when writing notes from brainstorming. Get your thoughts down.  Look back over them afterwards to pull from them what you want to focus on.  Eliminate everything that is not necessary.
  
The Four Remaining Weeks Class Syllabus
·         
·         Monday, May 20, 2013 – Focus on Writing Paragraphs
·         Monday, May 27, 2013 – Focus of Developing a Writing Outline
·         Monday, June 3, 2013 – First Draft of 750 – 1000 Words Writing Project
·         Monday, June 10, 2013 – Final Draft of 750 – 1000 Words Personal Writing Project

For Class Number Three, we will accomplish the following:

1.      Define what a paragraph is.
2.      Write four sentences to make a paragraph from a nursery rhyme.
3.      Learning Activity
4.      Assignment and Email Consultation
5.      Preview of Class Number Three – Focus on Writing Paragraphs

Merriam – Webster’s Online Dictionary defines a paragraph as a subdivision of a written composition that consists of one or more sentences, deals with one point or gives the words of one speaker, and begins on a new usually indented line.

A paragraph is a short written statement including more than one sentence providing more information than one sentence can alone.  The first sentence is the beginning of what other sentences will provide further information.

Example Number 1:  The Johnson’s vacation began the first week in July.  They are going to Orlando, Florida.  They will be away for two weeks.  They will go to Disneyworld, Sea World and Universal Studios.

The first sentence informs a family is going on vacation.  It also tells when the family’s vacation will begin.  The second sentence tells where the family is going.  The third sentence tells how long they will be away.  The fourth sentence will tell what the family is going to do.

Example Number 2:  The weather forecast calls for a possibility of showers at race time.  The race postponed twice because of rain.  Further delay causes the race cancellation.   Fans are disappointed and investors lose money.
 
The first sentence tells us three things.  It details a weather forecast, the possibility of thunderstorms and a race scheduled to take place.  The second sentence informs the race postponed twice because of weather.    The third sentence reveals a potential problem.  The fourth sentence reveals the potential outcome if the rain prevents the race.


Jack and Jill went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water.
Jack fell down and broke his crown,
And Jill came tumbling after.  

Jack and Jill see each other every day.  They are close friends who like to walk.  Late yesterday they walked up a hill.  One of them carried a bucket.  

The first sentence identified two people who see each other every day.  The second sentence reveals their relationship and activity they enjoy.  The third sentence reports a recent activity.  The fourth sentence reported more information about the activity of sentence three.

Reminder:  A paragraph is a short written statement including more than one sentence providing more information than one sentence can alone.  The first sentence is the beginning of what other sentences will provide further information.

Learning Activity and Assignment:   Write five paragraphs.  Practice the four-sentence approach.  Become familiar with the process.  This is how your work will be organized one paragraph at a time

Email Consultation – I am available to you to respond to your questions at oscarcrawfordmedia@gmail.com.

Class Number Four – May 27

Monday, May 27, 2013 – Focus on Developing an Outline – We will develop an outline of sections to write an essay.  We will examine how many paragraphs and sections of how many words are necessary for a 750-word work.   Get ready to continue building towards your first written work.  Next week, we develop an outline for your writing.  Examples provided.

Inspired to Write, But How is a production of Oscar Crawford Media
© 2013 Oscar Crawford Media